Senin, 30 September 2013

My criticize



                                                                                                                                     AKHMAD FARROBY
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My Criticize about the case above:

The news above tells that most of the teachers resign of some schools. They are threatened by secessionist and rebel. I think some the teacher depressed about the case. They don’t want the thing happened. In Indonesia, the best quality of the teacher is limit. Moreover, the teacher is who teach in village or mountainous. Most of them have minimum human resources. This article tells about lack of qualified teacher in Irian Jaya. In this island, most of the student has lack of knowledge because the lack amount of teacher and the located far away from central city. Those article also mention that more than 100 teachers who escape from mountainous regency. It makes some schools are closed and some students have to study in their own home. 

It can make the students reluctant to study and become the bad effect for them. Besides that, in Irian has a slightly inadequate facility, so the teacher who came from the other region wouldn’t visit in the island. In my mind, the government of Irian should raise a fund to build some schools in many regions in the island. In the other side, the government should also increases the number of teacher from other island and gives them the adequate facility. The purpose is making the student encourage studying well and they also get the qualified teacher and make good environment teaching learning activity. The news mentions that there is an institute co-operate with Cendrawasih University in Jayapura in order to produce 200 elementary school teachers in two places.

 I agree with the thing because it make number of teacher teach increasing and make the student can get more knowledge, but the teachers who came from another island have more good qualities. However, the student must more focus and study well in order to each of student that couldn’t read becomes to be able to read after the teacher come to the island. I hope that after the recruitment of teacher to teach make the students feel comfort and can more focus to improve their reading skills. As we know that most of people must can read and write. It is the basic ability of everyone. The last, I hope that the government can realize about the case happening in the island.

3 komentar:

  1. I think you need put a photo of you in your blog profile. Your article is good and easy to understand, but i think its too short if you want to summarize and annotate that article.

    BalasHapus
  2. I think you should summarize longer article, because your article is too short. However, your grammar use is good and the way you summarize is easy to understand

    BalasHapus
  3. I agree with everyone. This article is way too short to be summarized. 3 points for you and 2 points for other who commented.

    BalasHapus